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Post by Jenna on Apr 14, 2016 15:44:00 GMT
Tuck Everlasting
If I were to add a character to Tuck Everlasting I would add a character that would bring action. They would find her in the wood near the ash tree that has the little water gushing out of the rocks that makes you live forever. She would have a gay attitude and wear camo pants and a shirt that is dark green. Their name would be Vicky and she would be one hundred years old. Vicky would find a way to cure living forever and the Tucks dream of going to heaven would come true they would all be gay again. Vicky would finally go back to heaven.That is the kind of character I would want to add.
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Post by chloe on Apr 14, 2016 16:05:15 GMT
I think that a great idea!! Nice details
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Post by courtney on Apr 14, 2016 16:07:26 GMT
That seems like a really cool character. Nice idea!
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Post by Kiersten on Apr 14, 2016 16:08:19 GMT
Jenna your story was amazing! I liked how you used the word gay which means happy.You used very good verbs and puncuatians
Jenna your story was amazing! I liked how you use the word gay which means happy.You made it sound like it was acutally in the book,Vicky sounds like a very nice character.If she was my haracter she would totally be my friend!Great job jenna. Well Done!!!
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Post by Kiersten on Apr 14, 2016 16:08:39 GMT
Jenna your story was amazing! I liked how you used the word gay which means happy.You used very good verbs and puncuatians
Jenna your story was amazing! I liked how you use the word gay which means happy.You made it sound like it was acutally in the book,Vicky sounds like a very nice character.If she was my haracter she would totally be my friend!Great job jenna. Well Done!!!
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Post by Jenna on Apr 14, 2016 16:12:36 GMT
just to let you guys know gay=happy!
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Post by Kiersten on Apr 14, 2016 22:33:56 GMT
Jenna great job on your story.You used great puncuation and your verbs were terrific!As my opinoin I think that you should work on staying on topic because sometimes you were talking about Vicky and other times you were talking about a tree.Although your story was amazing!Vicky sounds like a great person she sounds responsible,respectful,and she takes iniitave of making great choices.I also knew that gay meant happy.The thing that was good in your story were that you talked about vicky sounds pretty and thoughtful.Jenna overall your story was great.You are the best!!!!!!!!\
ps:I acadentilly sended a post already but now i know we have to do a paragraph.
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Post by antony on Apr 15, 2016 15:18:35 GMT
nice job Jenna its really good. but why did u say their name was Vicky oh well but i really like it i think your character should be in the book. but Kirsten is right you talked about Vicky. then you talked about the tree so ya. but its still good. cheep it up!
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Post by Jenna on Apr 15, 2016 15:23:49 GMT
Thanks guys I read your and they blew my mind away. P.s I forgot to respond to some.
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