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Post by nathaniel on Apr 13, 2016 19:55:53 GMT
If i could add a new character to the lion the witch and the wardrobe it would be the queens A.K.A the white witch's sister.The queen’s sister would be a good guy. her and her sister didn’t get along well.The queen’s sister was a nice lady who cared for animals and the other beasts of Narnia.
She would help the four kids battle of her evil sister.She would have wavy blond hair and a beautiful green and blue dress.She turned the world to spring or summer unlike her sister.She would make flowers bloom and her sister turns people to stone and she turns them back to normal.
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Post by chloe on Apr 14, 2016 16:11:08 GMT
That is a nice idea and if that character was in the book then it would not always be winter
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Post by Ridley on Apr 14, 2016 16:14:54 GMT
great story the white witch with a sister awsome
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Post by k on Apr 14, 2016 22:35:54 GMT
great
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Post by Chloe on Apr 15, 2016 15:27:54 GMT
I think adding a sister is a really good idea because when the sister joins the children and she helps fight against the queen AKA the White Witch it would be the best showdown between the Witch and the sister and it would keep changing from winter to spring over and over again. I really like your creative ides for her costume and how you perfectly described what she looked like and how she was nice to everyone and she was also kind to nature. I think you could have used more correct punctuation and you said that she heals people who were turned to stone but Lucy already has that potion and I think you could have made her have a different power like she can stop her sister from doing bad things to the creatures of Narnia because she is such a good person while her sister is very evil. Overall I thought it was really good and the idea works perfectly well with the story. P.S What is the name of the sister or do I keep having to call her The Sister?
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Post by David on Apr 15, 2016 15:28:36 GMT
Her sister is name nathaniel ?
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