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Post by Avery on Apr 14, 2016 14:52:21 GMT
Harry Potter the Philosopher's stone
If i were to add a new character to Harry Potter i would add a dark wizard. This dark wizard would be dressed in a long black coat that went up to his face. He also wore a tilted and quite floppy top hat made from beaver fur. The dark wizard had very skinny arms and legs he was a very slender and tall man. He carried a long sharp staff made from petrified dark oak wood. In fact this staff was so long he carried it horizontally his staff was so powerful it could be replaced for a greatsword. The dark wizard is a wizard with no soul and takes souls of very powerful wizards and become very powerful. However if dark wizards don’t any souls they are very weak against anything. Except this dark wizard he had feasted on many great wizard's souls he had brought down terror to everyone you may not think that muggles were involved much but he haunted them and stole their souls in their dreams making them mindless and stupid. This is the character I would add to Harry Potter.
THE END
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Post by Hali on Apr 14, 2016 16:00:44 GMT
Nice I like it
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Post by chloe on Apr 14, 2016 16:03:04 GMT
Cool idea every story needs a bad guy
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Post by unknown on Apr 15, 2016 15:16:34 GMT
i thought there already was a bad guy....but cool idea bro
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah stranger
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Post by aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah stranger on Apr 15, 2016 15:37:26 GMT
lol
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